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Edit: The Crossing

Thursday night was useless, I’ve been writing all week without a break, but it was needed. I had trouble getting started tonight, but managed to get myself in gear and got something done. I started and completed the second edit pass of The Crossing. Better dialogue, better action, and I hope the plot holes are fixed.

It’s ready for crit now, so I’ll just hold onto it for my crit group to get going. 🙂 And now I get to start looking for markets to submit this.

Editing, Editing, Editing

The Crossing has been edited, I am happy to say. I think it’s really improved now. I may have to touch up a little here and there, but the plot is sound. It was hard to keep everything to “just the short story” as this is the short that sparked Winter Warrior.

Additionally, Valora doesn’t work for Korin’s twin in Forgotten Star. I have to go at it again.