The Crossing has been edited, I am happy to say. I think it’s really improved now. I may have to touch up a little here and there, but the plot is sound. It was hard to keep everything to “just the short story” as this is the short that sparked Winter Warrior.
Additionally, Valora doesn’t work for Korin’s twin in Forgotten Star. I have to go at it again.
DAWN BONANNO 