I thought this was going to be a SF flash, but it got complicated fast. It’s going to take me two days to complete (it’s a workday and the dayjob must get done). The story is outline, I’ve got character sketches, and I have scenes scribbled in my notebook that need to be transferred onto the screen and fit into the story chronology.
The character is slightly off for me. I don’t exactly identify with her, but she’s got serious problems. I think I need to give her some flaw that readers can identify with, since most of us aren’t deranged bounty hunters. š Maybe I’ll figure it out tonight, and write it up tomorrow morning.
Tentative title is “One Touch”.
DAWN BONANNO 