It’s the outline. I spent some time with Audrey today, my main character, and we went through her story together and while her discoveries and her courageous reactions to them are exciting, and the things she stands to lose is heartbreaking, it isn’t nearly fearsome enough. We need Stalker scenes. We need to see Him watching her. We need to feel his rage when she defies him.
So no words, but the outline is moving forward.
DAWN BONANNO 