Reviewed yesterday, edited today. It took about three hours once I got into it, but I didn’t go nuts with line by lines unless something really didn’t feel right. I’m still very close to the story, and toyed with several possible changes (surrounding a support character) and ended up adding a scene at the beginning to sort things out. (That’s becoming a common occurance for me, maybe something I need to think on when writing my first drafts).
This one will be out to the crit group shortly, can’t wait for feedback!