My latest short story is up at Daily Science Fiction: Cara’s Heartsong.
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Read it already. Nice story 🙂
Hi Dawn, I just read, “Cara’s Heartsong” on DSF. I liked the story, anything with gears is cool. I had a problem specifically with the line, “…with a small dose of the sedative.” If you say, “the sedative” as opposed to “a sedative”, you have to tell us which sedative it is. Otherwise, I enjoyed the story. Keep up the writing,
Red Jackson
Thanks for the feedback, Red. I’m always looking to improve where I can. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
Thanks, Bonnie. 🙂
I thought the story was excellent.
Thanks, Egan. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Steampunk heart surgery. Love it! 🙂 Nicely done.
Thank you! 🙂 Would you believe I just had a vision for the creation of Snickerpoodle?
Yep, we writers specialise in visions. 🙂