Some wonderfully dark ideas, some twisting of an already threatening situation, and a slave who stands up for herself… No wonder I can’t put it down. Perhaps this is a good sign.
I didn’t bother with the usual method. No analysis, no red-lining. Just jumped in and threw notes in to add or change details, deleted the uselesss stuff, and tweaked what didn’t work.
Another night, then I’ll send it off for feedback. If only I can lasso those past tense verbs leaping in front of my 1st person present…
DAWN BONANNO 