Continued. Slow moving, but forward moving so I am glad. I realize two things now: I really need to learn more about commas (what seems right one day, seems wrong the next and vice versa), and that I need to do something with the immaculate white cat I mentioned on page three. Hmph.
writer of fantasy, science fiction, and the occasional something else…
DAWN BONANNO 
Ah…yeah, commas…evil things.