I worked on Violas over lunch today, I’m about a third of the way through the story and the POV (1st) isn’t working anymore. I’ll move the story into 3rd and edit out the 1st perspective on the edit.
I’m almost done with the 3rd of 7 scenes, so definite progress. There is a lot of (fill-in-the-blank) type notes though, but that may clear up with the pov change.
I’m so excited to be moving again on this story. I’m just not thrilled with the bumpy-stumpy 1st draft sentences… can’t wait for the edit. I don’t think anyone is looking at this first draft.
As soon as this is done, I’ll get back to Carter’s crit. I’ve learned to balance multipe projects, but I can’t seem to juggle 1st drafts with other tasks.
DAWN BONANNO 