My brain likes to simmer with things, and I didn’t realize until bedtime last night that it was still simmering the ending to Fading Light. I didn’t realize this until I was reading a chapter of Think Sideways regarding story endings and then it hit me like one of those cartoon pianos falling from the sky. So I made the changes and updated the story version to my crit group. The prose isn’t as fancy as it was before, but the content is positively heart wrenching, which counts for more. Hopefully my gut is correct.
Worked a bit on the POV workshop Valerie Comer is running on FM.
Friends headed over for role playing tonight, so not much more for today.
DAWN BONANNO 